src/0title.txt

@@ -4,5 +4,5 @@ title: You Can Drive Out Nature With A Pitchfork But It Always Comes Roaring Bac
 
 ## Introduction
 
-This is a game about exploring an enchanted forest that is waking from a dream.
+This is a game about exploring an enchanted forest that is waking from a shared dream.
 

src/4locations/forest.txt

@@ -1,13 +1,13 @@
 
 ### Forest
 
-This is a friendly wood
+This is a friendly wood.
 
 - An [alces] stands just off the path, partially obscured by trees.
 
 - A young brown wolf seems surprised to see you.
 
-- A lost dog
+- A lost [snail hound].
 
 - A [sylph] forager is hunting for mushrooms.
 
@@ -21,8 +21,6 @@ This is a friendly wood
 
 - A [mossman] caring for a small sappling.
 
-- Circle of Dreams __perm
-
-    A small clearing in the woods. Small cairns are piled around the edge of the clearing and in the center is a large stone circle with what appears to be a tall wild hedge ground around and between the stones.
+- Circle of Dreams __perm. A small clearing in the woods. Small cairns are piled around the edge of the clearing and in the center is a large stone circle with what appears to be a tall wild hedge growing around and between the stones.
 
     If you have the *Fungalform* effect, and have completed the *Secret of the Forest Children* quest, read [Protocol K].

src/60bestiary/snail-hound.txt

@@ -0,0 +1,21 @@
+
+### Snail Hound
+
+A large snail native to the forest that somehow has evolved to be basically a slimy dog with a shell. It still has the body of a snail, eyestalks and a tail, but also four legs on which it can walk. It wags its tail when happy or excited, and retreats into its shell when frightened, and to sleep.
+
+
+---
+Mien
+---------------------
+Excited
+
+Scared
+
+Playful
+
+Is a very good boy
+
+Hungry
+
+So happy to see you
+---