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@ -43,7 +43,6 @@ People call me: PH
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-What helped me won't help me now
 Routine that is awkward and painful is no longer music to my ears /
 Often, people don't always take care of themselves /
 Why don't they love themselves /
@ -63,7 +62,7 @@ What helped me won't help me now
 oh, joy /
 ow /
 it's time to die, the birds say /
- death-songs comes /
+ death-songs come softly /
 please forgive them, Heavenly Compassionate Father /
 Boom
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