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				| @ -35,7 +35,7 @@ Eternal summer | ||||
| <p><b>A sad haiku | ||||
| </b></p> | ||||
| <p>petals floating down <br /> | ||||
| fading flowers, brown and dull <br /> | ||||
| flowers fading, brown and dull <br /> | ||||
| life-span of a cow | ||||
| </p> | ||||
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