From 067d13cb4b802337b58a80b56ae3501432e01b98 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Pheng Heong TAN <phtan90@gmail.com>
Date: Sat, 3 Feb 2024 10:07:28 +0800
Subject: [PATCH] edit works.html

For language, and clarity,
and concise-ness
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 works/works.html | 29 ++++++++++++-----------------
 1 file changed, 12 insertions(+), 17 deletions(-)

diff --git a/works/works.html b/works/works.html
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@@ -32,30 +32,25 @@
 </div>
 
 <div>
-<p><b>Commissions
+<p><b>Collaborations
 </b>
 </p>
 <p>
-I am highly selective with who I work with.
-I see a commission as a way to build a relationship
-with a fellow human being, rather than a mere
-transaction between a buyer and seller.
+	If I don't like you, I'm not going to work with you. You know that, 
+	right? </p>
+	<p>
 
+	Well, 
+	<a href="https://write.as/phtan/collaborations">
+		here is a list </a>
+	of people I <i>did</i> work with, in the past. For your perusal.
 </p>
 <p>
-Maybe I'll spend a year to get to know you, before
-agreeing to work with you.
-Now, I'd like
-to know more about you and what you stand for.
-What will you absolutely not tolerate?
-What kind of world do you want to build, while
-you are walking on this planet?
-</p>
-<p>
-Still interested to work with me?
+Do you think we can work together? Are you bubbling with ideas that 
+	excite you?
 
-<a href="../contact.html">See if you can
-find me.</a>
+<a href="../contact.html">Find me in Cyber-space,
+</a> and let's have a chat.
 </a>
 </p>
 </div>