From 2dd25854cf0f5c8eceb8272f5ca3167a011b4172 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Pheng Heong TAN <phtan90@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, 24 Jan 2022 13:14:18 +0800
Subject: [PATCH] edit

For better reading flow
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@@ -19,12 +19,12 @@ selling my pictures
 </a>, online.
 </p>
 <p>
-Now it is a question of marketing, i.e. trying to answer these questions:
+But now it is a question of marketing, i.e. trying to answer these questions:
 <ul>
-<li>who is my target audience
+<li>who is my target audience?
 </li>
 <li>
-how am I going to tell my target audience about my pictures
+how am I going to tell my target audience about my pictures?
 </li>
 </ul>
 <p>
@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ It was a great comfort for me to meet a fellow Christian (in early 2021) - we ar
 
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-As for jobs - nowadays, people whom I respect say they want to take care of themselves, instead of working at jobs that they dread. 
+As for a career - nowadays, people whom I respect say they want to take care of themselves, instead of working at jobs that they dread. 
 
 For example, the famous sports-woman, Simone Biles, made big waves in the Internet world when she withdrew from sports-events to take care of her own health. A lot of people scoffed at her.