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- I'm trying to support the next few generations, at church (which - is named St Andrew's Cathedral, in the country of Singapore). + I'm trying to support the next few generations, at church (I attend + St Andrew's Cathedral, in the country of Singapore).

I'm turning 33 years old this year, and my body is letting me know that it is ageing, and breaking down.

-I have to take care of the children of the future, who will inherit this planet +I have to take care of the children of the future, who will inherit this planet.

In my free time, I enjoy taking photos.

- It's delightful that some individuals like my pictures - so much that they sent me some money. (it's not a - million dollars, but significant enough for me). + It's delightful that some individuals enjoy my pictures + so much that they have sent me some money. It's not a + million dollars, but significant enough for me.

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