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@ -83,8 +83,8 @@ Eternal summer
 </b></p>

 <p>Sea-water. Wet socks. <br />
-Shiny and smooth surfaces. <br />
-Beach has a space-ship
+What is that shiny thing there? <br />
+Space-ship crashed on beach
 </p>

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