From 49d3553beff2ce9ec5d1b4682dee275733044911 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Pheng Heong TAN <phtan90@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 16 Jul 2019 14:48:04 +0800
Subject: [PATCH] Edit

I think this reads better, smoother
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 v_journal.html | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/v_journal.html b/v_journal.html
index 3b08013..c9ebd76 100644
--- a/v_journal.html
+++ b/v_journal.html
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ https://tonychen.bigcartel.com
   my bicycle, and, coming up to my room for a chat, told me he wasn't buying my bicycle after all.
   </p>
     <p>
-  At this time, I didn't ask him for his reason for turning down my sales-offer - I was too upset by this rejection, maybe - and after chatting
+  At that time, I didn't ask him for his reason for turning down my sales-offer - I was too upset by this rejection, maybe - and after chatting
   a little more, he said he was going back to his dorm.
   </p>
       <p>