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 <p><b>A haiku in the 21st century
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 <p>Sea-water. Wet socks. <br />
 What is that shiny thing there? <br />
 I don't know. Space-ship?
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+  <p>Sea-water. Salty.<br />
+What is that shiny thing there? <br />
+Satellite debris
 </p>

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