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Today, I had some time and space to revise it. I thank God for that.
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@ -35,8 +35,8 @@ Eternal summer
 <p><b>A sad haiku
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 <p>petals floating down <br />
-flowers turning brown and dull <br />
-life-span of a sow
+flowers fading, brown and dull <br />
+life-span of a cow
 </p>

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