From c1d16b88e3d0375714ac5b90d3901609481f9ccc Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Pheng Heong TAN <phtan90@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, 8 Jun 2020 08:45:18 +0800
Subject: [PATCH] Edit

Hopefully improve readability, if not legibility, for the viewer
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 colophon.html | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/colophon.html b/colophon.html
index 884a411..ecff508 100644
--- a/colophon.html
+++ b/colophon.html
@@ -24,16 +24,16 @@
       </tr>
 <tr>
   <td><i>
-        Tony (me, that is) processed Uli's photo in the software 
-        <a href='https://www.gimp.org/'>GIMP</a>, such as cropping,
-                                                                              and converting from a colour photo to
-                                                                              a Black-And-White photo
+        Uli's photo was processed in the software 
+        <a href='https://www.gimp.org/'>GIMP</a>, such which allows cropping,
+    and converting a colour photo to
+    Black-And-White.
         </i>
   </td>
 </tr>
     </table>
   <h3>Server
   </h3>
-<p>The web-site is hosted on <a href="https://pages.github.com/">GitHub Pages</a>.
+<p>This web-site is hosted on <a href="https://pages.github.com/">GitHub Pages</a>.
 </p>
 </html>