From c9102a1d2d4dc67b2e884d43c6d9e29ce092005f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Pheng Heong TAN <phtan90@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 14 Jan 2022 11:17:54 +0800
Subject: [PATCH] edit poem

It sounds better when I read it aloud
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 works/poetry.html | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/works/poetry.html b/works/poetry.html
index 416f911..408f20a 100644
--- a/works/poetry.html
+++ b/works/poetry.html
@@ -35,8 +35,8 @@ Eternal summer
 <p><b>A sad haiku
 </b></p>
 <p>petals floating down <br />
-flowers turning black and dull <br />
-life-span of a horse
+flowers turning brown and dull <br />
+life-span of a sow
 </p>
 
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