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    that a person who consumes the services of those who are in
    the mental health-care system is like a cookie that is being baked.
    According to the information that is given to the consumer (of services),
-   the cookie will be shaped. So, guess what will happen if what they are
+   the cookie will be shaped. And, well, if you've baked
+   a cookie, you ever tried changing the shape of a cookie
+   when it is hardened? Now, what if the cookie
+   has feelings? :-)
+   
+   <br/>
+   ^_^
+   <br/>
+   Which is easier, to change a cookie's shape before
+   baking, when the dough is soft, or when it is baked,
+   when the cookie is crispy and warm and maybe
+   even a little blackened? (overly blackened, if
+   I may add- you heard of carcinogens?)
+  </p>
+<p>A line from a movie coming to mind: "An' that's the way
+ the cookie crumbles" (nope, no prizes for guessing which
+ movie that is) :-D
+  </p>
+  <p>hm-hm-huh-huh (laughing) huk-hugu
+  </p>
+  </p>
+   So, guess what will happen if what they are
    told is that they are 'ill' or 'dis-ordered' throughout their
    consumption of services? It's not hard to imagine that
    they will spend a life-time trying to fight an 'illness' even