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@@ -42,9 +42,12 @@ on those who take refuge in you.'
   is going to be okay (as Jesus said, 'You
   do not understand now, but you will come
   to understand later.'). [writing about what
-  helped me cope with self-doubt and frankly, 
+  helped me cope with self-doubt and what
+  were, frankly, 
   terrors and a sense of destruction and
-  helplessness is way of giving as freely as I
+  helplessness is one way (out
+  of others which may be unknown to me)
+  of giving as freely as I
   have received (which was what Jesus taught:
   'Freely you have received. Now freely give.'] 
   With G!D's help, reading the information
@@ -57,7 +60,7 @@ on those who take refuge in you.'
   do not beat yourself up too much; you do
   not have to do that, even though there
   is a tendency to; or, there can be a tendency to.
-  G!D knows I do not know what you are going through.
+  G!D knows, and I do not know, what you are going through.
   G!D knows best what to do with you. I'm just
   glad, if you have been labelled with 'schizophrenia',
   (or other psychiatric labels or labels of other kinds)