From e8291365ae4a0681e115aaaf85fcda4586d97532 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Pheng Heong TAN <phtan90@gmail.com>
Date: Sun, 4 Mar 2018 12:56:45 +0800
Subject: [PATCH] Rephrase

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 index.html | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
index 73f963f..73b3b53 100644
--- a/index.html
+++ b/index.html
@@ -20,11 +20,11 @@ I may or may not change this web-page.
         Tumblr, under the user-name trust-in-jehovah
         </a>
       </li>
-      <li>Tinyletter.com, a system that 
+      <li>Tinyletter.com, a system through which
         <a href="https://tinyletter.com/now-to-jehovah-be-the-glory-for-ever-and-ever-amen">
-        lets me send you electronic letters
+        I can send you electronic letters
           </a>
-          (to your email-inbox), if you choose to let me.
+          (into your email-inbox), if you choose to let me.
         </li>
   </ul>
   <p>I'm rarely active, on the following: <ul>