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<p>
I'm trying to support the next few generations, at church (which
is named St Andrew's Cathedral, in the country of Singapore).
I'm trying to support the next few generations, at church (I attend
St Andrew's Cathedral, in the country of Singapore).
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<p>
I'm turning 33 years old this year, and my body is letting me know that it is ageing, and
breaking down.
</p>
<p>
I have to take care of the children of the future, who will inherit this planet
I have to take care of the children of the future, who will inherit this planet.
</p>
<p>
In my free time, I enjoy taking photos.
</p>
<p>
It's delightful that some individuals like my pictures
so much that they sent me some money. (it's not a
million dollars, but significant enough for me).
It's delightful that some individuals enjoy my pictures
so much that they have sent me some money. It's not a
million dollars, but significant enough for me.
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You can take a look: