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| </h3> | ||||
| 
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|   <p> | ||||
|   I'm trying to support the next few generations, at church (which  | ||||
|     is named St Andrew's Cathedral, in the country of Singapore). | ||||
|   I'm trying to support the next few generations, at church (I attend | ||||
|     St Andrew's Cathedral, in the country of Singapore). | ||||
| </p> | ||||
|   <p> | ||||
| I'm turning 33 years old this year, and my body is letting me know that it is ageing, and  | ||||
|     breaking down. | ||||
| </p> | ||||
|   <p> | ||||
| I have to take care of the children of the future, who will inherit this planet | ||||
| I have to take care of the children of the future, who will inherit this planet. | ||||
|   </p> | ||||
|   <p> | ||||
|     In my free time, I enjoy taking photos. | ||||
| </p> | ||||
| <p>   | ||||
|  It's delightful that some individuals like my pictures  | ||||
|   so much that they sent me some money. (it's not a  | ||||
|   million dollars, but significant enough for me). | ||||
|  It's delightful that some individuals enjoy my pictures  | ||||
|   so much that they have sent me some money. It's not a  | ||||
|   million dollars, but significant enough for me. | ||||
| </p> | ||||
|   <p> | ||||
| You can take a look: | ||||
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