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I think this reads better, smoother
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  my bicycle, and, coming up to my room for a chat, told me he wasn't buying my bicycle after all.
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-  At this time, I didn't ask him for his reason for turning down my sales-offer - I was too upset by this rejection, maybe - and after chatting
+  At that time, I didn't ask him for his reason for turning down my sales-offer - I was too upset by this rejection, maybe - and after chatting
  a little more, he said he was going back to his dorm.
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