edit poem

It sounds better when I read it aloud
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@ -35,8 +35,8 @@ Eternal summer
 <p><b>A sad haiku
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 <p>petals floating down <br />
-flowers turning black and dull <br />
-life-span of a horse
+flowers turning brown and dull <br />
+life-span of a sow
 </p>

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