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It sounds better when I read it aloud
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				| @ -35,8 +35,8 @@ Eternal summer | |||||||
| <p><b>A sad haiku | <p><b>A sad haiku | ||||||
| </b></p> | </b></p> | ||||||
| <p>petals floating down <br /> | <p>petals floating down <br /> | ||||||
| flowers turning black and dull <br /> | flowers turning brown and dull <br /> | ||||||
| life-span of a horse | life-span of a sow | ||||||
| </p> | </p> | ||||||
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